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one day a man went for a walk, And saw a yellow car, And got in it and started too ride it. He went through snake swamp, and fond out that it could swim. He saw a man with a red and white car, and decided to follow him. Before he knew in they were friends.

the mans name was Jim the man in the yellow car name was John. and John called the car Do-Doo. John and Jim were going to a race. The man said go they were off. Do-Doo was in the lead. Jim was going to do it the Hard way up the hills. John went to get Jim John knew he could not make it up the hills. He went to tell Jim that he would make it.

John and Jim had to go thought the snake swamp and Jim got bite buy a coba. Do-Doo was heading for the finsh line and won. atfer that Jim had to Get a shot ever 3 hours cause he got bit buy a coba.


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metalgypsy
Jun. 30th, 2007 06:54 pm (UTC)
wow, a scary story! I like the way the shot looks on the kids butt- kind've like a roasting marshmellow stake!
bardcat
Jun. 30th, 2007 07:47 pm (UTC)
a masterpiece!
welfy
Jun. 30th, 2007 09:56 pm (UTC)
Man, those pesky snake swamps. Maybe Jim and John should have stuck to the interstates!
createdestiny
Jul. 3rd, 2007 02:45 am (UTC)
Ha ha! That's funny.
gracegiver
Jul. 1st, 2007 02:39 am (UTC)
Have you ever self-analyzed all these writings from your childhood?
createdestiny
Jul. 3rd, 2007 02:44 am (UTC)
Too scared.
cwmackowski
Jul. 1st, 2007 06:44 am (UTC)
Very cool--and better than most of what I can ever come up with nowadays.
createdestiny
Jul. 3rd, 2007 02:46 am (UTC)
Oh please! ;P
bug_311
Jul. 3rd, 2007 12:17 am (UTC)
The shot in the butt pic, to me, looks a little phallic. I wonder just where your head was? Hmm?
createdestiny
Jul. 3rd, 2007 02:44 am (UTC)
I was such a queer little boy!
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